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前四句写景,第五句人物入场,后两句写情,由景至人再入情,情景交融,入情入理,有层次感,自然。全诗有可圈点处,如柳色入远空,写远处如烟柳色融入天际,为偶得之好句。
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长亭一笛晚,江岸落梅声,亦能给人以回味,联想的空间。
不足处:遣词略显生涩,似为新手所作,想是练习少的缘故,假以时日,当有所造就。
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Last Updated: 2009-2-14
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大家平的热闹呀,我挑个软的柿子捏(玩笑,主要是通俗易懂),也好交个卷。乌兄的春晖?春色?淡淡的年年岁岁已用四言短句的形式作了入情入理的评介,非常之好。我这里再添个足。
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