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  • 枫下沙龙 / 谈天说地 / This is my TWE exercise, Please gave me some advice. I am very appreciate of all help.
    本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛Title: Some people think that parents should plan their children’s leisure time carefully. Other people believe that children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time. Which idea do you agree with? Give reasons for your choice.

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    No doubt, I agree whit the first idea that parents should plan their children’s leisure time carefully, because there are too many benefits that outnumber its disadvantages not to choose it. But the second idea that children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time, on the other hand, has advantages no more than its disadvantages.

    The most important benefit of the first idea is that the parents can ensure that the children’s activity is appropriate and benefic. To achieve the same effect, let children arrange for themselves their free time may be bring the results that children take part in some harmful activity such as drug, violence.

    Another benefit of the first idea, which the second idea almost cannot achieve, is that provide some benefic practice in improving children’s disadvantages. And let children can be developed in various faculty.

    Although the second idea also has its seemingly profound advantage of cultivating the children’s independence, it can only achieved conditionally because the premise is your children have very good capacity in self-mastery and the surrounding of him or her is favorable.

    After understanding the reasoning above, it is quite safe now to say: choose the first idea which parents should plan their children’s leisure time carefully is a wise action.更多精彩文章及讨论,请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net
    • I usually write TWE in three or four paragraph. Paragraph one: First, you should narrate both side of the theme in your own words, then render your idea like ' In my opinion, From my point of view.......'
      Paragraph two: Give three or four resons to demonstrate your opion in details while using some examples for support. 'Firstly, secondly, Finally....'
      Paragraph three(optional): Descriping the other side of the theme in brief. (the other side also has some advantage, like...... but ......)
      Paragraph four: Conclusion, 'In conclusion, Generally speaking, In general.....'

      I took TWE twice(May 1999 and CBT Sep 2001).You can never get a score less than 4 or 4.5 with this structure, good luck!
    • 个人认为第一段有凑字数的嫌疑,优点和缺点说得太多了,绕来绕去的。