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  • 工作学习 / 事业与工作 / Poorly Written Cover Letters. The following posts are some poorly written cover letters from a book I'm reading. Please follow up your comments to each of these letters. -albxu(Yukon); 2001-5-17 (#73425@0)
    • Letter 1 -albxu(Yukon); 2001-5-17 {343} (#73426@0)
      1 January 1996

      Personnel Manager
      Acme Promotions
      Anytown, Canada

      Sir or Madam:

      I write in response to the opening for an events coordinator at Acme Promotions.

      I have enclosed my resume for your consideration. As you will see, I am highly qualified for this position.

      I can explain about the kittens.

      Sincerely,

      Danny Y.
    • Letter 2 -albxu(Yukon); 2001-5-17 {324} (#73431@0)
      1 January 1996

      Personnel Manager
      Acme Publishing
      Anytown, Canada

      Sir or Madam:

      I write in response to the opening for a editorial assistant at Acme Publishing.

      As my resume (enclosed) will indicate, I am hihly qualified for this position. I don't care what my references may tell you.

      Sincerely,

      Tony X.
    • Letter 3 -albxu(Yukon); 2001-5-17 {481} (#73440@0)
      1 January 1996

      Personnel Manager
      First Acme Savings and Loan
      Anytown, Canada

      Sir or Madam:

      I write to you in response to the opening for a bank teller at First Acme Savings and Loan.

      As mentioned in your ad, I am an honest, highly motivated, independent worker that can be trusted with the responsibility involved in handling large sums of money.

      My resume is enclosed. (Please note that both prior convitions are currently under appeal.)

      Sincerely,

      Danny Y.
    • Letter 4 -albxu(Yukon); 2001-5-17 {473} (#73450@0)
      1 January 1996

      Personnel Manager
      Acme Manufacturing
      Anytown, Canada

      Sir or Madam:

      Pursuant to your advertisement for an account manager, I am enclosing my resume and three letters of reference.

      In anticipation of an interview, I thouroughly researched your company and find it conductive to my employment needs. Unfortunately, during my investigation I ripped my best plats on your security fence.

      To whom shall I forward the bill?

      Sincerely,

      Tony X.
    • Letter 5 -albxu(Yukon); 2001-5-17 {415} (#73460@0)
      1 January 1996

      Personnel Manager
      Acme Investments
      Anytown, Canada

      Sir or Madam:

      I write in response to the account manager opening with Acme Investments' finance department. Please find enclosed my resume and references.

      Also, please note that although I currently have numerous job opportunities at this time, I will work for Acme for free for the first twelve (12) months.

      Sincerely,

      Danny Y.
    • Xixi, I've read them. So I :-X -diao_david(LoveBeer); 2001-5-17 (#73512@0)
    • Thanks for bring us such wonderful master pieces. I guess it is a good guide for those people who dont know how to screw things up. hehe. -hearts(hearts); 2001-5-17 (#73760@0)
    • Can you show us some good cover letters? Thanks. -dongwil(金字塔); 2001-5-17 (#74001@0)
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