Topic: 得奖作品 --> @枫下论坛 The Rolia Forum

顶一下，恭喜大师。 -sammy(时间); 2004-3-7 (#142303@65)
恭喜！！！确实很经典！ -mildkiller(M.K.); 2004-3-7 (#142307@65)
congr. -game_over(雪之回忆); 2004-3-7 (#142357@65)
该请饭了啊，咔咔 -pasu(InTheSky); 2004-3-7 (#142359@65)
thx. :) -ztech(technozoom@pbase); 2004-3-7 (#142377@65)

说实话，我并没觉得这张照片好啊，不管它得没得奖． -california(jennifer); 2004-3-8 {320} (#142724@65)
很多东西好与不好和它是否得奖是没有关系的．就比如这个照片．首先，我认为角度不是很好，如果一定要拍这个照片，这不是最佳角度．第二，画面构成不好，主体过大，周围烘托不够，这样主体显得单薄不丰富．第三，光线运用的不好，如果表现雪，雪的纯洁与冷清表现力不够，如果表现整体意境，则光线处理不当．以上我是的分析，多有得罪，只为共勉．

这作品的立意好。其实什么光线、色彩、明暗都不是关键，关键是拍了什么东西。这照片的房顶、墙还有两旁边的小房子，都是竖着的线条构成。虽然只是破房子，但是给人以特别整齐的动态感。 -pyramid(树木); 2004-3-8 (#142733@65)
谢谢. 完全同意#1 一定会有比照片上更好的角度. 不过, 这是一个不错的角度. #2 实际上和#1 是一个意思. #3 嘛, 肯定不是表现雪. Okay, enough Chinese input typing, here's what I think. -ztech(technozoom@pbase); 2004-3-8 {583} (#142786@65)
This is a private property, the only possible way to take a picture is to zoom from the road. That very much limited my choice regarding your #1 and hence #2. Because to include certain things but not other things in the surrounding has very much to do with the angle and perspective.

I don't understand the #3 point you are making. What do you mean by 光线处理不当? The sun comes from the south west side. Same relative position I was on. I think its perfect lighting angle, because it highlights certain portion of the barn not all of it, which helps to avoid too much detail.

关于第三点，我的意思是这样的．．． -california(jennifer); 2004-3-8 {482} (#142981@65)
我不是说你是表现雪还是表现什么，我的意思是说你的主题不突出，这个是我的本意．看了你的描述，我能感觉到你当时的取景角度比较难，我也曾经有过类似的经历．我也只是就画面构成本身，如果考虑你当时的处境，那就没办法讨论作品本身了，您说呢？
至于光线，你是用数码拍的，可能后期处理没有办法了．光线的角度是没问题的，但就是光线的强弱，我认为不是很好，如果稍稍能让人产生一点遐想的感觉，就非常好．我认为作品一定是要表现什么，而不是单纯的美丽与否．所谓的意境吧．．．
谢谢你赞同第一点和第二点，共勉．

I appreciate your comments, I personally would never want to type such a long chinese message. But based on your contents. I'm not sure if I'll agree with u. If you've ever done farm and barn photos, you'll find -mocha(新的不去旧的不来); 2004-3-8 {322} (#143035@65)
that everything is brown colored this time of the year. Take this photo for example, if there were no snow at all, it would have been a muddy ground, brown weeds, dark roof.

How would you feel about that? The little bit snow there brigthens the whole scene. Enhances the look and feel of the barn. don't you think so?

I like both barn photos you have taken. but like this one a bit more. This old dilapidated barn with its faded shade of red and sagging beam and windows surely would stir a nostalgic feeling among the judges. hehe -erinca(erinca); 2004-3-8 {21} (#142730@65)
Congratulations. :-)

dilapidated...dilapidated...dilapidated...dilapidated...Got it. -sammy(时间); 2004-3-8 (#142735@65)

Mary, I need to learn some English from you from now on... Great English. -ztech(technozoom@pbase); 2004-3-8 {40} (#142788@65)
and thanks for the encouraging comments.

Please do spare my blushes. Your English is always the best at least as I see it. :-) -erinca(erinca); 2004-3-8 (#142835@65)

No, Mary. I'm standing by my statement. -ztech(technozoom@pbase); 2004-3-8 (#142894@65)