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wow,怎么漏掉了这样的大作?在论坛,这是长篇了。这样的大作,现在不多了。故事层层铺垫,情节细腻,真是难得的佳作。老夜太会讲故事了,佩服。
leonardmars
(小马识途)
斗胆提点建议,感觉还可以再精炼一点。
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Last Updated: 2017-1-16
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