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先赞一个文笔。一如既往地流畅,真实自然。看到这一集吃瓜客说点感想

xiaoxiaoai (艾)
感觉这两人之间肉体的互相吸引很多,但思想的碰撞和交流太少。我觉得如果能有更多精神层次上彼此的默契和相知的刻画,可能会让人物更丰满一些。如果单单只是情欲向北就考虑到离婚了,是不是显得有些浅薄。胡乱一点建议而已。:)
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2017-9-15 -05:00
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