我的E文不怎么样,请E文高手审核一下我的Cover letter, 尤其是最后关于税单的一段。另外看看除了护照和存款证明,我的资料还缺什么。谢了

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Dear Sir/Madam,

It's my pleasure to apply Canadian immigration. Canada is a very beautiful country and I always dream that someday I can live in it. I have been working at subsidiary companies of Compaq and Nortel, now my occupation is system specialist at HP. With these experiences, I can adapt Canadian culture and environment quickly. I am sure I can contribute to Canada if my application could be accepted.

I have completed the application forms and other required documents placed in-order and list below:
· Checklist
· Self-Assessment Worksheet (my score is 71)
· IMM0008 form and imm5406 form
· Resume
· Project list
· Reference letters chopped with company’s officer seal
· Business card of the person signing my reference letters
· Photocopy and translation of my residential register form
· Photocopy and translation of my ID card
· Notarization of Birth, Marriage status, degree and graduation
· Notarization of my working experience
· Notarized certificates of no criminal conviction records
· Photocopy of my offer letter from my recent company (English version)
· Last month salary tax receipt and salary pay slip
· 8 photos in envelop
· Mailing labels with both English and Chinese

I am very sorry that I provide only one monthly salary tax receipt. Now let me explain it to you. In original my salary tax was paid in a collective tax account in China, I can’t open my own tax account until Dec 2000 when I bought an apartment in Shanghai. According to Shanghai local finance policy, my salary is tax-free to the amount of the price of my apartment. The salary tax receipts are voucher of refund. I can provide my salary receipts with photocopies from Dec 2000 to you, and I will extremely appreciative if you accept these photocopies and return me these original tax receipts after verifying. After all each receipt means more than 1,200 RMB to me.

Yours sincerely,

XXX
2001.8.9
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