语气不太合适. 这是BUSINESS CORRESPONDENCE, 要BRIEF, HIT THE POINT.不需要那些"客气" 和"表决心"的话(俺没恶意啊). 如果这是APPLICATION的话, 建议去掉第一段. 下面日期不对,要放上面,不是2001.8.7格式

dropoutinmiami (东北的饺子)
2001-8-9 -04:00
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