这是我帮LG写的Cover letter, 七拼八凑的没什么把握, 能帮我们修改一下吗?十分感谢.

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Rm.105 No.-24-2 Tong Guang Lane
Long Li Road
The People's Republic of China

September 20, 2001

The Canadian Embassy
19 Dong Zhi Men Wai Dajie
Chao Yang District
Beijing 100600
The People's Republic of China

Dear Sir or Madam:


I am a programmer and applying Canada independent immigration with my wife. Canada appeals to me us most, not only her fresh air, good living conditions or perfect welfare system, but also her advanced high technology and free personal development space. This to us is most important and I think this decision must change our whole life.

The high interests in computer technology drive me to choose Computer Science in my university study and my career to engage. The 4 years' academic background and 2 years’ professional experience for the big famous software company equips me with the precise qualifications as a programmer. I think my major and my skill are exactly conforming to the needs of the Canada society and benefit to Canada, as well as making me a better personal future.

Enclosed, please find
· Fee Payment receipt
· Checklist
· Self-Assessment Worksheet.
· Imm0008 form, family composition form and Education & Employment form for my wife and me ? I
· Resume
· Detailed professional experience chopped with the company’s official seal
· Reference letter chopped with the company’s official seal
· Photos related to my previous job at Vanda.
· Information about the Vanda Corporation.
· Explanation letter about my current job status
· Certificate about the wrong birthday on my Bachelor’s diploma and degree certificates
· Copy of Hukou for my wife and I and all immediate family members
· Copy of ID card for my wife and I
· Notarization of Birth, Marriage status, Bachelor’s degree and diploma for my wife and I
· Notarized certificates of no criminal conviction records for my wife and I
· 8 photos of my wife and I
· Mailing labels with both English and Chinese


PS:(Proof of funds and school transcripts will be handed in later when I come back to my school and get it)

Thank you very much to deal with my application.

Best regards
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