accept 4/5 your advice.
however, about the fifth,
“she should, must avoid those kinds of mistake. because of her high scores. “ should, must 这是哪家的英语？？
by the way, I really really need a strict teacher such as you(no kidding, seriously,) , who give detailed mistakes and spur me to improve my poor e.
stealthily, I just told you why I posted some speech to criticize him. (my toefl score is not lower than his). I do not think that it is neccessary to show off everywhere, he should directly ask what he wanted and then gave others his background including G/T scores; this is the common way, unlike him, look his post's title " GRE 2280,TOEFL 643, ", what did he want to say? once I even confused.
oh, Cherokee! do not give up me, come on, keep your critical and constructive suggestion, I really really need such kind of "LIANG4 SHI1" as you, and I believe you have the capability to do so.