Tuxie gg, please recheck the sentence “oh, Cherokee! do not give up me,”, it maybe stupid but I think should write it as” plz do not give ME up”, BUT NOT “GIVE UP ME” your know that here in china nobody got 643 or higher in toefl should make such a terrible mistake, especially considering the situation that you are trying to be a gentle man.
And plz do not waste Cherokee’s SPARE TIME, I will “keep my critical and constructive suggestion” on your articles . because Cherokee is someone have a stronger power that me in the field of writing. And it maybe stupid but I think I can be your , “kind of "LIANG4 SHI1" .