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Dear XXX,

Thank you and Joan for your time and effort spent in interviewing me in Monday (Nov.26) afternoon. 不要用括号。I am deeply impressed by your broad knowledge in health and safety and your company’s accident prevention program. 拍马屁对路。 表达可以再提高。

As you can see from my resume, I finished my contract with XXX in last September. I would like pursue my career in occupational health and safety, though XXX will probably call me if it recruits full time production personnel. You noticed as well that I started my career in health and safety when I joined American oriented company – XXX in 1992. The company sent me to Norway half a year for an intensive health, safety and quality training program including classroom courses and on job practices. 重复简历不能加强人家对你的印象。

I am looking forward to hearing from you when a decision is made 表达不对。 并且暗示对方在决定做出之前, 你可能并不想与之交谈。

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1.不是专业的跟踪信。建议读Knock'em Dead十遍.

2.跟踪信的主题是:他永远是对的。回想他说的, 在此肯定。并借机表达那些你的简历, 和你在面世中没有提到的你的强项, 而那些强项是你刚通过面试发现是对方公司正苦苦寻找的。

3。注意: 任何时候, 重复不能加强你的意思, 重复暗示对方拿你的话不当回事, 因此有必要再说一遍。

4。信发出之前, 找人改英文。
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回到话题: Rollor,Slimpig, Hearts and other DXs: I've just finished an interview. My friend reminded me of thanking letter. Would you please review my thanking letter and critique it?

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