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提醒一句:短短的几段文字里就有好几处矛盾。比如:三里说“听着一言不懂的英语”,四里“我没有填大学毕业”。大学毕业的英语不至于一言不懂吧?编故事的话,文笔倒是其次,自圆其说是第一要素。这是我小学写作文时老爸的教诲。:)

fionah (Fiona)
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2002-1-30 -04:00
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