Lovebeer, wjiang, egglinton,..... any other `Daxia`men, please take a look at my essay, what score can I get? please point out my errors, I will appreciate it. thank you.

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When choosing a place to live, what do you consider the most important:location,size,style,number of rooms, types of rooms, or other features? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

If I am choosing a place to live, I think location is most important among all the features.

Location connects with our life seamlessly. When a location is decided, many factors such as environment, safety, culture , are also decided consequently.

There is no doubt that location decide environment. When I first came here, I found it was amazing that there are so many difference between different location even across only one block. While one district is full of prosperity, guilty and poor may in another district.

Furthermore, I would like first consider location because it link with convenience. Every day people must work and at the weekend they may go to shopping center. So a good place must be easy to go to the working place and the shopping center. This is why we can see in many rent advertisement there is so many `location sentence` such as `near subway, shopping center, walking distance to…..`.

At last, an excellent location can provide a fascinating scene. Imagine how beautiful it will be when we live a house overlooking a park or a lake. That will be my dream.

Besides location also affect education quality while a family have a child.

Although there is many other reason to select other factors to chose a house, in my opion, there is nothing more important than location in a determination.
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