Letter 3

albxu (Yukon)
1 January 1996

Personnel Manager
First Acme Savings and Loan
Anytown, Canada

Sir or Madam:

I write to you in response to the opening for a bank teller at First Acme Savings and Loan.

As mentioned in your ad, I am an honest, highly motivated, independent worker that can be trusted with the responsibility involved in handling large sums of money.

My resume is enclosed. (Please note that both prior convitions are currently under appeal.)


Danny Y.
2001-5-17 -05:00

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