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相约北美 / 移民留学 / Rollor,Slimpig, Hearts and other DXs: I've just finished an interview. My friend reminded me of thanking letter. Would you please review my thanking letter and critique it?
-alan01(alan01);
2001-11-26
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Dear XXX
-jeffrey815(Smartiecat);
2001-11-27
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写完了才发现很多语句不通,唉,自从读CS以来,连英语BS都退步了。
-jeffrey815(Smartiecat);
2001-11-27
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Thank you for your time and critique!
-alan01(alan01);
2001-11-27
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Great.
-rollor(Rollor);
2001-11-27
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1,注意格式(双方详细地址、日期、Dear Mr. XXX:、及结尾的SINCERELY,和签名)。2, 分别发送给两人(不要写you and joan),不要一起发(应在24H以内发)。3,三段落,但要再短些.4, more xxx?
-yunboo(运波儿);
2001-11-27
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格式thank-you letter:
---Return address
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---Date
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---Company Address
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---Dear Mr. XONG:
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---P1) Thanks for interview. What job?
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---P2) Review skills(add more if necessary)
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---P3) Contact #. Opportunity. Available.
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---Sincerely,
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---signature
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---your name print here.
-yunboo(运波儿);
2001-11-27
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Great format for thank-you-letter! Thank you very much.
-alan01(alan01);
2001-11-27
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Thanks for your great comments! I should have mailed them seperately. However, I only know the second guy's first name.
-alan01(alan01);
2001-11-27
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use "Dear (first_name): is ok. BTW, a colon followed is better.if you write to your friends, you could use comma.
-yunboo(运波儿);
2001-11-27
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抱歉,回晚了。我个人认为,感谢信就是一个礼节性的信件。简明扼要,第一感谢对方提供机会和时间来面试你,第二再次表示对对方的公司感兴趣,第三希望得到offer。
-hearts(hearts);
2001-11-27
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"Sincerely yours, " should be"Sincerely, or "Yours," never put two words together.
-yunboo(运波儿);
2001-11-27
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Why not?
-maile(FinchEast);
2001-11-27
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custom!
-yunboo(运波儿);
2001-11-27
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I think you should use them together too.
-jeffrey815(Smartiecat);
2001-11-27
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Why, I think we should use them together.
-clinux(C/Linux);
2001-11-27
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful advise and damn good sample! By the way, do you think "can contribute" more certain than "might be contributing"?
-alan01(alan01);
2001-11-27
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用CAN不能用MIGHT. 这时候还不肯定等啥时候? 如果你是EMPLOYER, 你愿意HIRE一个CAN的, 还是MIGHT的? 嘻嘻
-dropoutinmiami(东北的饺子);
2001-11-27
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How about "could"?
-clinux(C/Linux);
2001-11-27
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I think "can" is better, more assertive
-dropoutinmiami(东北的饺子);
2001-11-27
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看看对你是否有用? #57192
-dropoutinmiami(东北的饺子);
2001-11-27
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Thank you! I've learned something new from your previous post - mention one or two selling points you forgot to say during interview.
-alan01(alan01);
2001-11-28
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评论
-wjiang(☆激昂☆);
2001-11-27
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Thanks you very much for your pertinent comments!
-alan01(alan01);
2001-11-28
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