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《My love is in a far place》- Cannot recall the feeling, some part of me or you must be in the far place...

My love is in a far place
2020-06-24

My love is in a far place
Like the stream flowing
Like the rhythm beating

My love is in a far place
With thoughtful mind
With beautiful soul

The rain drops drippled
Along side the toenail
Hold the breath
Wave the hand
Penetrated like a ray
One step and one step more
My love,
My love is in a far place

The smoke scattered with the drift
Blurred the window, blurred the view
Look far and far
Look deep and deep
Look until wings grow
Look until heart fly
My love,
My love is in a far place

The music notes took the thought threads
The music sounds carried the misses
On every cloud move, I am sinking
On every wind touch, I am shivering
My love,
My love is in a far place…
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  • 枫下拾英 / 心情随笔 / 《My love is in a far place》- Cannot recall the feeling, some part of me or you must be in the far place...
    • 你成神了,又唱又跳,还不同调。
      Rhythm beating?
      • 看不懂,啥意思?你怎么知道我又唱又跳?吓到我了!
        • Rhythm beating is a little bit reasonable than rising. I think. (#13048948@0)
          • Got it👌, agree👍. Still quite a challenge to write English poem, limited vocabulary limit imagination and soul。