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天生的好写手。谢谢分享。

troyd (.)
1)叙事性稍稍有些多。
2)是不是考虑在情感冲突的时候,加一句半句扎心的话,就好像电影里画面凝滞,只有眼神或者是物体无限延伸,把想象留给读者。
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2017-11-5 -04:00
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