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  • 枫下拾英 / 心情随笔 / A prom -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-23 {191} (#13997252@0) +1

    Too painful to cry
    Even breath
    Tears went down
    Silently like the rain

    Too painful to speak
    Even one word
    Eyes closed
    Same as my heart

    ​​​​​​​

    • typo？应当是 poem？ -the_dumb_one(粉红撩死人); 2021-9-23 (#13997261@0)
      • A poem -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-23 {257} (#13997268@0)

        Too painful to cry
        Even breath
        Tears went down
        Silently like the rain

        Too painful to speak
        Even one word
        Eyes closed
        Same as my heart

        Too painful to think
        Even for a second
        All hopes collapsed
        As ever imagined

        • 人长熟之后，不光禽兽不如，连草木都不如。所以如果还能够being sentimental， 是非常可贵的, 就象这首乐曲： -the_dumb_one(粉红撩死人); 2021-9-23 {341} (#13997314@0)
          • I am ridiculously romantic.... Thus too sensitive to pain...maybe -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-23 (#13997689@0)
      • 嗯，corrected -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-23 (#13997272@0)
    • 不知道说得对不对：但凡好的诗人都是用母语写诗。 -less_is_more(二手黑客); 2021-9-23 (#13997334@0)
      • 我不是诗人，谢抬举，写诗的时候经常感觉不论是英语还是中文都写不好。。。郁闷 -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-23 (#13997686@0)
    • 这是怎么了？Hugz. -yoyodi(悠悠); 2021-9-23 (#13997463@0)
      • Just to record.... -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-23 (#13997685@0)
        • Somethings are beyond words. Hope to send you some solace. I’ve been looping Ed Sheehan’s Photograph a lot lately when I feel down. Some people say it’s a love song about long distance relationships, -yoyodi(悠悠); 2021-9-23 {445} (#13998330@0) +1
          but I feel like it’s a reminder from my mom that love/life can hurt sometimes, and that our inner child always have a home because we’re always loved.

          • Thanks for your kind wods -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-24 {102} (#13998572@0)
            Sometimes I couldn't understand why my life is even more dramatic than movies....which I am sick of it
            • The world could be harsh for us hopeless romantics, but our sensitive hearts are perfect for experiencing the beauty of it too. It all comes as one package, the hurt and the beauty. -yoyodi(悠悠); 2021-9-24 (#13999232@0)
              • You are right to some degree.... One of my university classmate said I have the ability to present powerful feeling.....so that day when I was in enamous pain, -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-24 {137} (#14000439@0)
                I decided to write it down to remember it and comfort myself,....I am glad so many friends enjoyed it and also gave out so much caring...
    • good, good, the more the better. -anexplorer(页于); 2021-9-23 {17} (#13997603@0)
      I mean the poems.
      • Why? -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-23 (#13997684@0)
        • If it's about your emotions, I should not have said that. -anexplorer(页于); 2021-9-23 (#13997691@0)
          • En....that is all right....what comes what goes....let it be... -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-23 (#13997693@0)
    • you meant a poem? -troyd(Troy); 2021-9-23 (#13997676@0)
      • Yeah -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-23 (#13997682@0)
    • A poem (updated) -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-23 {256} (#13997680@0)

      Too painful to cry
      Even breath
      Tears went down
      Silently like the rain

      Too painful to speak
      Even one word
      Eyes closed
      Same as my heart

      Too painful to think
      Even for a second
      All hopes collapsed
      As ever imagined

      • 翻译一下 -less_is_more(二手黑客); 2021-9-23 {171} (#13997760@0)

        凝噎似忘痛
        痛往息中去
        泪之靡靡
        如秋雨悄悄

        惜语为却痛
        痛往词里行
        秋水无波
        如凡心已徂

        我难思无存
        心亦因忧止
        诸幻尽灭
        如梦回千年

        • 兄台，文采出众！叹服！ -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-23 (#13997812@0)
      • 借题发挥，不能呼吸的痛 -leeh1(非非); 2021-9-24 {994} (#13998988@0)


        不能呼吸的痛
        阻断了眼泪
        阻断了语言
        阻断了思想

        闭上眼 闭上心
        任泪水静静流淌
        一如跌落的希望
        死寂得没有声响

        请给我一秒的时间
        抖落睫毛上的雨滴
        请给我一秒的时间
        抹去这突来的哀伤
        仰起脸来吧
        微笑着追逐太阳
        即使在阴雨天
        仍能感知光的方向


        The pain

        Stopped the breath

        Stopped the speech

        Stopped the mind


        Eye closed

        Heart shut down

        Tears washed out hopes

        Washed out noises


        Just give me one more second

        To shrug off the sadness

        Just give me one more second

        To tidy up the messes


        You will see

        My head is up

        My head is up higher

        Even in a cloudy day

        :


        • 太厉害了，中英文啊！ -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-24 (#13999197@0)
    • 本来以为可以看到party照片的，原来是首伤心美诗 -clear(clear); 2021-9-23 (#13997695@0)
      • Thx -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-23 (#13997709@0)
    • porn？ -vega_lee(天津包子-就不改); 2021-9-23 (#13997702@0) +1
      • Haha -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-23 (#13997707@0)
    • 唉，话说中秋节给老妈微信。她没理。我也是烂事多，就没 follow up。过了一天，觉得不大对头，赶紧给哥发微信。哥说老爸住院了。现在没事了。咱妈陪护。医院现在就让一个人陪护。我和你嫂子都是外围，送饭跑腿。说老爸还得再住几天，稳固状态。愁云满布 ing。 -troyd(Troy); 2021-9-23 (#13997754@0)
      • 配个图，patpat.... 雨后的寂静 -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-23 {197} (#13997816@0)


        :

        • 谢谢。 -troyd(Troy); 2021-9-23 (#13998081@0)
          • 人年纪大了偶尔有些小毛病都是正常的，过两天就好了，不用担心，多打电话聊聊天，让他开心最重要 -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-23 (#13998166@0)
    • 好诗 给加个一👍 -eleclan(eleclan); 2021-9-23 (#13997836@0)
      • 谢谢，那个缺了一段，完整的在下面的回复里：） -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-23 (#13998039@0)
    • 不错哦！ -datura(带刀山贼); 2021-9-24 (#13999067@0)
      • 谢谢~ -doris99(智🐮); 2021-9-24 (#13999200@0)

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