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【秋.无题】

uptowngirl(若初)

(1)
为什么秋天总是令人伤感
明明赤色，金色，赭色，黄色
天那么蓝云朵舒展
阳光象枫叶那么清甜

是掠过林梢的那只乌鸦么？
树叶呢喃
青苔把石头染湿了

一个苍白的女人黯然走过
唇如火焰
心如白霜

(2)
菊谢的时候，没有半点声响
她们安静的依偎在花托上
象粉色的云，在云里睡着了
在萧瑟晚秋
一点点憔悴
一点点老去
象她笑着挥别的衣袖
优雅而秋天

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Last Updated: 2015-10-27

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枫下拾英 / 心情随笔 / 【秋.无题】 -uptowngirl(若初); 2015-10-27 {363} (#9735602@0) +4

写得真好！“唇如火焰，心如白霜” -guanshui3000(灌水); 2015-10-27 (#9735633@0)
赞诗情画意~~ -minitoy(friendzone); 2015-10-27 (#9735659@0)
美～ -blankbliss(给我一个空间); 2015-10-27 (#9735729@0)
居然被要求要英文版。勉强译了第一首，一并贴这儿 -uptowngirl(若初); 2015-10-28 {319} (#9736416@0)
Fall Colors

Why people fall in blue
In the glistening colors of fall?
Gold and wine, ochre and yellow
White clouds in sweet blue blue sky

Is it that crow?
The leaves chatter at the top of the gleaming woods
Wet stones glaze in moss

One pale woman loitered all alone
With lips of flame
and heart of frost

漏了一句。。。 sun shines like the fresh sweet tasting of the maple leaves? -kakaka(小胖子); 2015-10-29 (#9738470@0)

小胖真细心。那啥，今儿那个要求英译版的也发话说少了这句这句， -uptowngirl(若初); 2015-10-29 {121} (#9739115@0)
我都说勉为其难了，哼！人说何难！我只能回，you can you up :D

by the way, 大家都来玩嘛，这句怎么译？阳光象枫叶那么清甜？

写的好？ by the way, 为什么无题？都写了那么多，加个题目很难么？ -win(秋天的菠菜); 2015-10-28 (#9736512@0)

你给题个名儿吧 -uptowngirl(若初); 2015-10-28 (#9737097@0)

50度灰 -hulele(yk); 2015-10-28 (#9738230@0) +4

51度秋。。。相当于10.5°C。 -kakaka(小胖子); 2015-10-29 (#9738473@0)

甚好。谢谢 -uptowngirl(若初); 2015-10-29 (#9739118@0)

少说也五彩斑斓啊，你就个灰？ -uptowngirl(若初); 2015-10-29 (#9739084@0)

上城，我把感叹号搞成了问号。。。。咳，年纪大了，错误百出哈。。。。。should be "写的好 ! " -win(秋天的菠菜); 2015-10-29 (#9738499@0)

能把 “苍白的女人”的故事稍微展开么？ -ysysning(樱桃三果～); 2015-10-28 (#9738268@0)

冻的．．．． -ltndsy(Joanna); 2015-10-29 (#9738340@0)

:D -uptowngirl(若初); 2015-10-29 (#9739078@0)

你想怎样 -uptowngirl(若初); 2015-10-29 (#9739148@0)

展开展开～～ -minitoy(friendzone); 2015-10-29 (#9739177@0)

好吧，下次万一再碰到她，一定微信电话QQ一并要齐。。。俺就可以展开了 -uptowngirl(若初); 2015-10-29 (#9739246@0)

配图(#9738259@0) -arfeifei(老顽童★[O|||||||O]); 2015-10-28 (#9738276@0) +1

这地儿是等着人躺上去？:D -uptowngirl(若初); 2015-10-29 (#9739232@0)

上城请确认收到我道歉！ -win(秋天的菠菜); 2015-10-29 (#9739019@0)

冇喎 -minitoy(friendzone); 2015-10-29 (#9739024@0)
check you pm. -ysysning(樱桃三果～); 2015-10-29 (#9739060@0)

checked, no PM, not even AM. -win(秋天的菠菜); 2015-10-29 (#9739066@0)

收到收到。感动感动。 -uptowngirl(若初); 2015-10-29 (#9739076@0)

好文。是鬼故事吗？ -lansilver(雪中漫步); 2015-10-29 (#9739103@0)

哈哈，越来越好玩了 -uptowngirl(若初); 2015-10-29 (#9739121@0)
嗯，苍白女人为何黯然，法人深省，引人深思 -win(秋天的菠菜); 2015-10-29 (#9739160@0)

人生苦短，红颜尤其易老 -lonelyhero(lonelyhero); 2016-5-1 (#10079826@0)

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