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写的挺好的,锋哥这个人物比较丰满,现实中也很多,中危,有心仪女子,但道德底线也比较高,女主塑造的差一点,前几章说过她其实活泼外向,受老公出轨打击才消沉的,但现在又归小时就心里受创伤,中段后故事发展有点慢了,小说还是要靠情节的

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2017-10-26 -05:00
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